Hi !

I'm an aspiring comic-book artist and illustrator and I'd to share my art but it seems I can't upload it here :/
Hi !

I'm an aspiring comic-book artist and illustrator and I'd to share my art but it seems I can't upload it here :/
You have a Deviantart? If not you could make one and post it on there, then copy and paste the link to post on the forums.
Thanks Kathan !

Here are the links to my DA: https://www.deviantart.com/huctus117/art/Blue-Team-739792507
https://www.deviantart.com/huctus117/art/Halo-3-Practice-Page-1-775362892
https://www.deviantart.com/huctus117/art/Halo-3-Practice-Page-2-775363474
https://www.deviantart.com/huctus117/art/Halo-3-Practice-Page-3-775363519
https://www.deviantart.com/huctus117/art/Halo-3-Practice-Page-4-775364509
https://www.deviantart.com/huctus117/art/Halo-3-Practice-Page-5-775364548
https://www.deviantart.com/huctus117/art/Halo-3-Practice-Page-6-775365284
https://www.deviantart.com/huctus117/art/Halo-3-Practice-Page-7-final-775365286
I looked at all your drawings. I think they're really good, but there's several really important shots that you missed that are critical for setting the mood for scenes you drew in comic book form.

On your Halo 3 Practice page 4, there's a shot where Sgt. Johnson lets out a sigh of smoke. This is important because it adds a feeling that this is a depressing scene, but all Johnson is allowing himself to show is this sigh. He is only allowed to give this sigh because he is a soldier.

On Halo Practice Page 5, there should have been a whole body shot of Johnson holding Cortana's chip instead of Chief standing. This way you can make Chief's hand more surprising. The next page can be only chief standing, making it WAY more epic.
They should add something were you can add pictures.
Thanks ShotAces ! The problem is that you have to make shortcuts otherwise it would be too long. There's also some passages that are barely understandable on paper if you follow straight the shots from the game.