I liked it, but here is my critique.
1. If they are hours away from controlling the ring and frying humanity, why phone Earth and tell them?
2. Why the anger towards humanity? Seems the two haven't interacted much.
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1. If they are hours away from controlling the ring and frying humanity, why phone Earth and tell them?
2. Why the anger towards humanity? Seems the two haven't interacted much.
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